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Guest fubila

wild peugeot from fubila..

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Guest fubila

hi friends...this is my second sketch show in forum..I wait your comments..thanks.

I designed it two years ago.

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Hmm... well the sketches are really muddy.. they look more like water colour painted over pencil sketches. I don't really care much for the variations you made with photoshop effects, there are 2 sketches, front/rear.. the photoshop effect versions don't do much for your sketches, they just distract and confuse.

 

What you should do is remove all the variations you made, just show the 2 original versions and try to clean them up a bit, meaning: try to use a black fineliner to sharpen up your linework, because it is really wobbly now.

Then, try taking some of the cloudy messy effect away from the colouring. Colouring often works best when you keep it simple and clean, it shouldn't distract too much from the actual sketch.

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Guest lengfeng203

it is will be more better if you pay more attention to the detail

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