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Fiat 500 - Next Generation

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The link doesn't work for me either.

 

Also, didn't Fiat just release a new 500 a year ago?

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Interesting style. I actually quite like it - it retains familiar proportions while pushing the boundary a bit and incorporating interesting detailing.

 

I think your perspective may be off in a few of the images, but the main problem is the composition. You way you have the images just sort of jumbled on the page - while angled up and down and around - distracts from the drawings. Play with size and alignment - try and fill up more of the white space, while making one image more dominant...it'll draw the eye along and improve visual interest, so the sketches will read better.

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Guest Gaskon

lipinskimichal_11.jpg

 

lipinskimichal_12.jpg

 

I add images on first post and here.

 

newt @ MWE - this contest for next fiat 500, (after 2007 version), is organised by officina 83 style, i dont know why, because i know about new Fiat 500, the designers from officina know too ; )

Turborog - thank for comment

 

Im unsatisfied with this project, but i show it, because i want some critique, for design better cars.

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