Comments On Sketch

[Guest Rewire]

Hi,

 

pls give some feedback to help me improve. thanks.

[Guest clark]

the car looks as if it's curving from underneath, the perspective is too exagerated.

 

the wheels look a bit small, and in a funny place

 

the front end is confusing too

 

 

I like the sketchy style though

but maybe it would be better to start off with more detailed drawings and make them 'sketchier' when you start to understand the forms of the cars better

[Sketchyd 4]

Theres a difference between sketchy and messy.

Yours is messy.

 

Also look at cars.

Your car has an impossible wheel base.

 

Work on perspective, look at cars.

Draw cleaner.

 

I need to see more to judge your skill level and to help you out.

If intnerested upload more.