Internship Emailer - A Final Critique Please!
Posted 13 August 2008 - 08:19 PM
It's 99% where I want it to be, I would just like some final feedback on the clarity of the project stories and what things you might change. I'll begin mailing this out this week probably...
Posted 16 August 2008 - 05:20 PM
What a stupid brief! Is it a school project? Are you learning to copy stuff?
Ok for designing a product for nike for bmw etc... you have to learn how to match your design with the langage of a company to adapt your process to the process of a company that's even the really center of the job.
But to copy Newson, Irvine, Massaud etc... what's the point?
Otherwise good stuff and good luck for the future.
Posted 19 August 2008 - 11:43 PM
Posted 20 August 2008 - 02:48 PM
taryn paper no offence but how come you failed to see the sketches on the portfolio? maybe you were looking at your portfolio instead ? heh oh ok, but still not joking
Posted 20 August 2008 - 05:56 PM
I'm tried to make that clear in the portfolio pages, maybe I didn't succeed?
As for sketches, did you just not find them? I have sketches in all projects except the birdhouse (shoe, trash can, stool, picture frame)... Did you want more quantity? Better Quality? I'm not sure what you mean...
Thanks everyone for the feedback! Keep it coming!
Posted 24 August 2008 - 05:42 PM
i wasn't blaming you for the grcic project but the subject itself.
Your portfolio is nice and clean as other people said.
Maybe it needs something more outstanding not to look like the others designers folio,AND you have the skills for that.
Posted 25 August 2008 - 05:10 PM
Posted 18 September 2008 - 09:45 PM
Posted 19 September 2008 - 09:40 AM
Keep it up,
Posted 20 November 2008 - 03:28 AM
Posted 20 November 2008 - 06:01 AM
one thing, after a cursory glance at your site... maybe don't use the word stuff in big letters on the first page. It makes you look amateur. whether you are or not is irrelevant, if people can't tell. Don't let the viewer know how much experience you have. The more professional you look, the more you're worth.
agree, better to put something like.. graphic design portfolio? or graphic design collections? anything is better than stuff.
Posted 20 November 2008 - 06:22 AM
Any comments on the portfolio itself?
Posted 20 November 2008 - 06:36 AM
Posted 20 November 2008 - 06:45 AM
Be careful of using too many buzzwords and complex terminology in one sentence. If the reader has to go back and mentally flip through a thesaurus after every other word, then you're doing yourself a disservice.
There are a couple of pages - simple human is one - that look very empty. They might work well as half of a page with more interesting information or at least a caption to add interest.
Well done on the whole, just rework it a bit and keep it simple.
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