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Guest ninja/japan

!----- Car Sketches -----!

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Guest madmatt

I like your design..the render is very clean..I'm waiting for other your stuffs

 

Bye

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Guest john-john

Sorry to tell you that but your post seems a little pretentious, as a matter of fact , the constsruction is not bad but the render isn't fantastic.

You should ask some advice to improve this forum is made for that. :-)

Don't take bad what i tell you but you have some potential as i see so it is just for you to improve yourself.

 

Bye

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Guest r.schmidt

maybe finish your sketches so they have something to discuss...

 

Watch out for using the soft brush at such a small diameter (on the glass on lower car). I do like the sketch lines bleeding through tho'.

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I think a lot of the shading and reflections need to be harder to give a better impression of the type of surface and define it a bit better. The soft brush isn't flattering, even though you're (sort of) getting the idea of defining the orientation of surfaces by their lighting.

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Guest ninja/japan

Thank you advice !

How about this sketch ?

10 min

size....about Benz A class

Is this small ?

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