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Guest chinalsl

Wacom Bmw

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Guest antigravity11

Nice work! Can I ask, do you use a scan of a sketch as an underlay or do you just sketch straight onto a blank screen?

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Guest snugja

I think it's a nice start. I'd work on the linework some more before adding the color. Also I think it's a little soft and mushy so maybe upping the contrast and adding some clean highlights would help with the impact of the whole sketch. How lond did this take you to do?

 

On the second one, the perspective seems off, but nice render. Like I said, try to get a good linework first then add color.

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As was mentioned the BMW sketch is nice but some of the shading comes off as a bit soft. The Z4 is a real edgy vehicle, so some sharp highlights are needed to best communicate that. I would also sharpen up the shadow to make it seem more like a shadow on a ground plane, vs just a dark spot underneath.

 

Some kind of background will help add contrast and pop it off the page a bit more.

 

The phone is nicely rendered, but the bottom corner the perspective is weird.

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Guest chinalsl

Thanks for everyone's reply,I 'll do my best to make it better~!

 

waitting for me ....

 

I 'll come back soon with the best skeches.

 

--------------------------------------------mike lin

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