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Guest Ollock

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Guest Ollock

Hi there,

 

This design was worked on for a day then i did quick final sketch and then rendered it in photoshop.

 

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My aim in life is to reach the auto design industry, i graduate in december and need as much help as i can

 

get, please give feedback on ways that i could imporve.

 

Thanks

 

Ollock

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It's a real nice rendering. Off my head I really couldn't tell you anything that looks wrong or poor about it. The little floating spoiler in back looks a bit awkward, but overall the form is nicely defined and it has a real good sense of movement to it.

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Guest Padd

Yes I agree about the spoiler. It looks too static, maybe add some motion blur? Only minor crit, otherwise very nice.

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Guest fblacka

very nice render ... a few issues tho ... the spoiler design is weak imo and doesnt fit the cars futuristic look ... i dont understand the mirrors shadow ... theres on the body and also on the ground ... however it is possible if more light sources are used tho i cant see that on the ground shadow ... another minor issue would be the unfinished reflections at the fenders area ... it looks good overall and i like it ... keep them commin ;)

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Guest sixto62

Well done. Like what you did with the wheels and fenders. Very decieving though.

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Guest liz hurley

Nice work big fella! Liz likes it - makes me go all guey! particularly like the way the cutouts and highlights are highlighted. Only area i think could be improved is the bonnet/windscreen; looks a little chunky up front. But then Liz likes a bit of bulk up front. .

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Guest john-john

I agree with the coments it's a little bit too trouble...But i like the design and the rendering is dynamic (escept for the spoiler). I should work mre with photoshop too it's doing impressive results when it is well used!!

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Guest racccoon

Hey John-John!

 

That red image in you signature is awesome! Wow. You are the man!

 

How did you do this, is it a hand sketch or Photoshop?

 

Racccoon

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Guest shrednerd

I like the style maybe blur the light beams a bit, they look like lasers, unless thats what they are. Light saber lights ya that's it. Looks cool though. I love photoshop. I find that the more time and the more layers the better the rendering will look. Maybe try different filters to on dif layers. keep it up.

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