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I love the sketches. i think you should put some door mirrors on the volvo. thats just me, but i think it would make the car look less futuristic.

 

thx ... ure right bout the mirror ...

 

but ... what about my actual work??? ... it would really appreciate some advices ...

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Guest lufrbasketch

There are a couple different ways of drawings hands.

I think a good exercise is to try to draw your hand without looking at the paper, just concentrate on looking at your hand. This works pretty well after a few tries.

Also , why dont you just try sketching over photos or images of hands, all different sizes to try to get used to drawing the positions of each fingers.

It is good just to try and skeleton out the hand with primitives aswell before you crack on because that will guide you and give you an idea about whether your proportions are correct or not.

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There are a couple different ways of drawings hands.

I think a good exercise is to try to draw your hand without looking at the paper, just concentrate on looking at your hand. This works pretty well after a few tries.

Also , why dont you just try sketching over photos or images of hands, all different sizes to try to get used to drawing the positions of each fingers.

It is good just to try and skeleton out the hand with primitives aswell before you crack on because that will guide you and give you an idea about whether your proportions are correct or not.

 

hmmm ... should be interesting ... thx for the advices ... i will try those tricks! ;)

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To get good proportion try drawing and not taking your eye off the object you are drawing at all, and not even looking at the paper. it seems like a silly idea and your first few drawings will be poor, but you will soon start to notice that the proportions are more correct because this technique trains hand-eye co-ordination.

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To get good proportion try drawing and not taking your eye off the object you are drawing at all, and not even looking at the paper. it seems like a silly idea and your first few drawings will be poor, but you will soon start to notice that the proportions are more correct because this technique trains hand-eye co-ordination.

 

thx for the advice ... i tried that and came out pretty funny ;) ... yes they are poor but i stay the course ;)

 

heres a drawing i did on a prep course for the uni ... i know perspective is not the best but im trying ... open for advices again as always :)

 

 

ztz2ng.jpg

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Guest hugosilva

cool,you got talent,i like the cars and the phones,that second render of the car is so awesome,i like it,keep up the good work

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[/b]Border Lines: Like everyone else here, I think that your sketches are great.

One thing I do miss, is border lines. It is best noticed at the second car you sent, it's almost imposible to part from the Background to the car. Try using bolder lines in the cloer parts and a thinner line where the background is, but let us see those lines. I think it would help your sketch and I'd like to see how it came out.

 

Keep up the good work.

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Guest fblacka

ok ... thx guys ... considering the comments today i decided to redo that Volvo sketch ... i used the old one as an underlay ... but unfortunatelly i noticed that the perspective is completely wrong ... i fixed the the greenhouse but that made even worse ... but it was too late when i noticed ... it was halfway done ... i tried to fix it so i think is soso now ... so finished anyways ... at least it was another good rendering exercise ;) ... will post the original old one and the original new one .. notice: no photoshop except for the border! the old one was pencil + marker ... the new one is done with black ballpoint pen + marker + some pastel touches ...

 

old one:

volvoold22vh.jpg

 

new one:

volvonew34cf.jpg

 

 

edit: sorry for the delay ... i couldnt upload till now

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Guest fblacka

some more ...

 

audia1027so.jpg Audi A10

 

citybubble6ve.jpg ... some citycar ... maybe a new Micra?

 

comments&critics are still highly appreciated :)

 

 

ps: what about posting some portraits? will i get some comments on it? ... my entry exams are quickly approaching and believe it or not beside the product design task we will have to draw portrait, full figure or such ... :S i wasnt expecting such an exercise so im quite new to this theme... but still, i hope i will make it :) so ... portraits? :)

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Guest Gavztheouch

Wow its great to see how your sketches have developed over the thread, your most recent car sketch of volvo looks great now, nice work!

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Guest menappi

@#$@#$ man i think ull do great, u draw better then a lot of ppl already in uni. hey could u do me a favor, post some drawings of cars u did when you were learning? do you have any from when u started to try to draw cars?

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@#$@#$ man i think ull do great, u draw better then a lot of ppl already in uni. hey could u do me a favor, post some drawings of cars u did when you were learning? do you have any from when u started to try to draw cars?

 

- thx for the comments ... but still, most likely i will fail on the uni entry exams ... its really hard to get in :S

- about the favor ... sure, but im still learning :D ... ill see what i can do ... will post tomorrow hopefully ... and will post some portraits too if u dont mind coz im really weak at it and i need critics and advices :S

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Guest BAIBA

I really like your drawings, but what uni are trying to enter? I think your technique is really good, and I´d like to see more ideas, more concepts...

 

please keep posting

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Guest Aleksander

The last sketches at really nice . I like your style ;)

P.S. Sorry for my english

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Guest fblacka

so back again :) ... thx for the comments ;)

 

so tomorrow is my first round entry exams ... showing my portofilio (whats that? :) at the uni ... so now im struggleing to put together my folio in a hurry, maybe panic :) ok so actually its almost done ... its just the automotive part wich i started and finished today but i aint pleased with it at all ... somehow the picture itself is boring and i dont like its composition neither ... i had no time and no practice... :S so im waiting for suggestions ...

 

bla0kb.jpg

 

bla26pr.jpg

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