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Sketches for my corrent project.

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Guest Morteza Pourmohammadi

here is sketches for my corrent project.

styling a monster machine! :rolleyes:

 

I do it by 4x6 wacom using Corel Photopaint 12.

 

any comments?

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Hi Morteza, is this a commercial project? It looks very functional, I have no idea about industrial equipment like this, but I found this design that I think you might find interesting as well:

 

http://www.cardesignnews.com/features/2004...-show/index.php

Excavator by Jon HÃ¥kansson

 

I think you can improve some of the drawings by not using the airbrush to color the way you use it now. It looks a little bit blobby.

If it is possible, try making the airbrush less soft (harder edges), a bit like a marker. This way you can use it more like you would in a traditional drawing.

Another technique more suitable to make big areas is to use very big airbrushes to make surfaces very smooth and even, and then I would erase the areas that I don't need. I would do this on a seperate layer, so that you don't mess up any previous work you did on the drawing.

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Guest Morteza Pourmohammadi

here is another.

i try to do what Ren advised.

wish to be correct.

any comments?

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it looks like you have partially painted over an photo (the front side), nice technique if that is true.

the illustration is much better than your first 1. Clear forms. The shadow is maybe a bit too loose. I think it is better to keep the shadow just under the whole machine instead of spreading it out that way. It doesnt fit in the rendering style of the machine.

And the cabine.. it looks like it is somehow pressed/crushed, cause the construction beams are bended. Is that an design element? Cause I think it should look more rigid and strong, like the front part of the machine.

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Guest Morteza Pourmohammadi

benko>>> Thanks. :D

waikit>>> about the cabin ur right. i try to correct it in the new sketch.

 

thanks for your comments. I'm ready for the next! ;)

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Guest Morteza Pourmohammadi

here is the newest.

I finish it just now. ;)

and now waiting for ur comments.

thanx for previous comments. ;)

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