Liviu Tudoran 5 Report post Posted March 3, 2012 This is my 5th semester project here at IED Torino. Please comment and criticise..Thank you! More at tudoran.carbonmade.com Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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advancedboy 5 Report post Posted March 4, 2012 Well done. That`s a lot of sketches. I like your fluidity in style and the way you master pencil.I see influence of Birdcage concept in the rear, also the concept reminds me of some Oldsmobile Aerotech concepts from 80ies. maybe you could fine tune some areas. Like the lower part of rear bumper. Maybe it could go down a bit otherwise we can see half diameter of the wheel from rear prospective. It would distort its proportion with the front overhang, then you should follow the influence on that too. Also the roofline seems to curve almost all over the body, it could be, maybe shortened a bit. Also it is interesting to note that the line of windows right where it goes into doors and fender panels has a negative angle, this is characteristic of Mercedes. On Mercedes it creates an unpleasant tension, while yours is ok, because it creates a symmetry with side stampings and lower skirts. Probably it is hard to understand what I am talking about here, so I added your own sketch with editing. Don`t take me too serious, I know nothing of solid design, it`s just my opinion. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
advancedboy 5 Report post Posted March 4, 2012 Here `s your original. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
muadib3d 1 Report post Posted March 5, 2012 I can only say - WOW! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vander 10 Report post Posted March 5, 2012 great job, and congrats on being featured on the Coroflot design genius gallery! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
grasshoper 1 Report post Posted March 19, 2012 Great job and also thank you for sharing the process. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Liviu Tudoran 5 Report post Posted March 20, 2012 Thank you all for the comments! I appreciate! I like your proposal advancedboy, thank you for sharing! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
advancedboy 5 Report post Posted March 23, 2012 You`r welcome Tudoran! Thank you too! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iTox 0 Report post Posted March 26, 2012 Really nice! We did not learn to sketch well using graphic tablets in IED Milano because we had a teacher teaching first time, and sketchbook designer which breaks all the time. I see you do it pretty well! . The rear side of car first reminded me of 2011 geneve car show concept from renault; https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/172896_10150122779513607_602513606_6354331_5363800_o.jpg https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/191061_10150122779058607_602513606_6354322_2785502_o.jpg but after comparing they have not so much similar.. Really nice job man! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
