AndreasD 1 Report post Posted January 14, 2012 Hi all! For school purpose I have to make a rendering of a product. I chose a 70's coffee maker. Any comment is welcome! Thanks, A. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Moog 0 Report post Posted January 17, 2012 Yeah, holy cow! The colors the colors! Unfortunately my eye goes from all over the place to the light in the bottom right hand section of the drawing. I find peace there. It seems there is way too much going on in the image and the coffee maker gets lost in the scuffle. Tone it down if you can. Try to eliminate much of the background or make it much lighter than the main focus of the project which should be the maker. Just my two cents. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vander 10 Report post Posted January 18, 2012 yes I agree with Moog, the focus should be on the product and not the background. Way too much going on in the background. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Moog 0 Report post Posted January 19, 2012 yes I agree with Moog, the focus should be on the product and not the background. Way too much going on in the background. yes I agree with Moog, the focus should be on the product and not the background. Way too much going on in the background. Funny vander.....see what I found on your site. For some reason I hardly even notice the jetski. Hmmm. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vander 10 Report post Posted January 20, 2012 lol Nothing wrong with giving the viewer a sense of scale by including an individual in the rendering. This is actually quite tame compared to what you see in a lot of advertisements these days... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AndreasD 1 Report post Posted January 21, 2012 HI, Yeah you are right, due to that I gave it a 2nd try. A. 1 Simon2468 reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vander 10 Report post Posted January 21, 2012 much better! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
