shoot on my portfolio, im not made of sugar = looking for improvement http://www.jordikr.nl
Feedback Please
Started by jordi krusemeijer, Jun 26 2011 11:47 PM
6 replies to this topic
#1
Posted 26 June 2011 - 11:47 PM
#2
Posted 01 July 2011 - 07:19 PM
i think that you have really good projects but the colors of your web page dont help, imo, you have really good graphic design on your work (i wish i could have that) and changing the color of the web can help a lot.
#3
Posted 02 July 2011 - 10:27 AM
Click to enter, logo is cool, but the page isn't very appealing.
Once I enter the page, the icons for creation, projects, and personalia are a bit ambiguous.
They all look the same, and they remind me of trashcans... or a bird.
Click on creations, your text is "justified," this looks odd, what was your reasoning behind this?
I dont want to have to click on a blank box to see what the project is. And because it's blank, it looks like an error and the images aren't loading. I'm not really sure what brandmark means, which makes me wonder what the difference between the 3 sections are.
Theres alot of blue... not really feeling it. Its a bit frustrating that I need to click many times to actually get to see the content.
Think of it as a first draft and try again. If you are coding this yourself and aren't very good, try looking into free portfolio sites, theres alot out there. For example: carbonmade.com
Once I enter the page, the icons for creation, projects, and personalia are a bit ambiguous.
They all look the same, and they remind me of trashcans... or a bird.
Click on creations, your text is "justified," this looks odd, what was your reasoning behind this?
I dont want to have to click on a blank box to see what the project is. And because it's blank, it looks like an error and the images aren't loading. I'm not really sure what brandmark means, which makes me wonder what the difference between the 3 sections are.
Theres alot of blue... not really feeling it. Its a bit frustrating that I need to click many times to actually get to see the content.
Think of it as a first draft and try again. If you are coding this yourself and aren't very good, try looking into free portfolio sites, theres alot out there. For example: carbonmade.com
- waikit and streamliner like this
#4
Posted 13 July 2011 - 07:23 PM
Are we reviewing your work or your website?
#5
Posted 29 July 2011 - 09:57 AM
Had a look, but... I am not sure what you are trying to communicate to me and it was not appealing enough to me to find out. No offence but....Huh?
#6
Posted 18 August 2011 - 03:11 PM
Good work but Page looks OK. Try other options. You have good creativity.
Thanks,
Litmus Branding
Thanks,
Litmus Branding
#7
Posted 15 October 2011 - 02:36 PM
To Much drill down to get to content, I didn't even spend the effort to fully review site ... make it more user friendly, website competition is to good to have such an unfriendlu site.
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