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Graduate Portfolio Of Yahya Tioso

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Guest MU_Freak

Hello, Designers

 

I am a recent graduate of Bachelor of Industrial Design at Swinburne University of Technology. Currently, I am seeking job.

Please take a look at the links below for my Industrial Design portfolio

Portfolio by Yahya Tioso

It would be great if you could give your opinion!

 

Cheers,

 

Yahya

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Guest wout

Excellent portfolio! I specifically like the My Folder USB HD. I would buy it immediately.

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Guest MU_Freak
Excellent portfolio! I specifically like the My Folder USB HD. I would buy it immediately.

 

 

Thanks a lot, man! :D

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Hello

 

I love your portfolio, especially the logical layout. Just a couple of notes:

 

write work experience instead of experiences

the descriptions are in firt person untill the bike lamp. The other descriptions are better than the bike lamp one.

Also write "most dangerous and most likely to cause a home accident" instead of "than most likely" in the kettle description. Also say "a safety locking lid". In the tackle boxes say "advertising purposes" Also revise the fishing reel description and software is singular (instead of softwares).

 

These are just small grammer mistakes and not really important, everything else is top notch.

 

Cheers,

 

Pablo

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