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Guest Land Pirate

Hey all,

 

Only new enough to digital hand rendering sketches and what not. Just hoping I can get some crits on one or two pieces. I will have more as time goes on and I find time between college projects.

 

But anyway here we go first up:

 

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Guest Nick Madsen
Hey all,

 

Only new enough to digital hand rendering sketches and what not. Just hoping I can get some crits on one or two pieces. I will have more as time goes on and I find time between college projects.

 

But anyway here we go first up:

 

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Perspective is a little too cranked - the far side of the unit looks like its at an angle. This is happening because your vanishing point is too close. Try moving the VP further off and you wont get this effect.

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Guest Arturo Arino

Ok

First of all I personally recommend a book called Design Sketching, this will help you improve your sketching in almost every way.

 

Second,

I did some corrections (i hope you like them)

 

a. define where the light was coming and added white or a reflection of that light

b. a shadow ...always place them in the floor

c. contrast, I darken a bit more the parts the light was not hitting directly

d. I corrected the perspective, it was easier to me to cut out one shelve but it was for you to understand perspective,

 

Well, I hope this helps you improve

 

Keep sletching!!

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