Sketchyd 4 Report post Posted September 10, 2010 Great sketches and linework, and much improvement. My only gripe: the wheels. It's ruining all your sketches. Do a proper ellipse\, show some indication of a tire and do a full fender and wheel well, no more of your pinwheel like wheels. It's not a style when it's wrong. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest NelsonDesign Report post Posted September 13, 2010 Well these aren't my favorite sketches, but they have tires! More on the Audi... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sketchyd 4 Report post Posted September 14, 2010 Good job in adding tire, but now im sure you can see it as well. The wheels look really off, as well as the tire. Also, you have no wheel wells, so although u have drawn the tire, it looks nothing like a wheel that is part of a car. It just looks like a flat drawing slapped onto the side of the car. Finally, it's a common style / technique I see that even I am guilty of using. But unless your wheels are truly sticking out from the side of the car, the wheels wouldnt show up as you have drawn it. Basically, fix the wheels and your car sketches will be taken to the next level. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest NelsonDesign Report post Posted December 11, 2010 Long time from the last update... sorry about that..... Here's some goodies i've been working on Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest NelsonDesign Report post Posted December 23, 2010 More sketches.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites