Guest lokilabs Report post Posted May 29, 2009 Please critiq the sketch. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest montecarlos Report post Posted May 29, 2009 honestly, I can't work it out... but it looks cool ? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cash68 7 Report post Posted May 29, 2009 Needs better lineweight. The texturing in PS is a nice touch, but as previous commenter stated, I can't figure out what I'm looking at exactly. The problem is line weight (absent) and shading (contradictory). The bottom half looks flat, the back half looks like the light is coming from one direction, then there's a blue smear on top of the other part, which doesn't jive with the back. The whole thing reads very flat. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest lokilabs Report post Posted May 29, 2009 Needs better lineweight. The texturing in PS is a nice touch, but as previous commenter stated, I can't figure out what I'm looking at exactly. The problem is line weight (absent) and shading (contradictory). The bottom half looks flat, the back half looks like the light is coming from one direction, then there's a blue smear on top of the other part, which doesn't jive with the back. The whole thing reads very flat. Thanks Cash. I agree it does read flat. I will work on that with the second rendition. I will have to pick a light direction. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest lokilabs Report post Posted May 30, 2009 One more. Still working on it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Taro Report post Posted May 30, 2009 oh i thought that part was the front (due to the goggle looking thing on the back) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
parel 2 Report post Posted May 30, 2009 What is the helmets purpose? Riot Gear? Biking? That would allow a better critique of function. As is the helmet looks a little flat a squarish in the rendering, and a little large. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest lokilabs Report post Posted May 30, 2009 What is the helmets purpose? Riot Gear? Biking? That would allow a better critique of function. As is the helmet looks a little flat a squarish in the rendering, and a little large. Just some quick concepts for a friend of mine who works in the ViDeO Game Industry. Actually Parel the helmet is just right and may even be too small. I drew it around a females head and the neck makes it all seem a bit over scaled. Helmet increases vision distance, night vision, protects head, kills anyone who touches it, as well as attaching to the thoracic suit structure at the spine and chest. Just a concept for fun. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Kaiyuan Report post Posted May 30, 2009 haha kills anyone that touches it. It would make a cool gas mask. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest lokilabs Report post Posted May 30, 2009 New design, more clean, thoughts? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest funwithapencil Report post Posted May 30, 2009 really cool looking. reminds me of the helmet princess laya used in star wars to rescue whats his name from jabba the hut. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest lokilabs Report post Posted May 31, 2009 really cool looking. reminds me of the helmet princess laya used in star wars to rescue whats his name from jabba the hut. ill have to check that one out. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest lokilabs Report post Posted May 31, 2009 Hey thanks for all the replies. Any more comments would be greatly appreciated. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest yangyuxuan Report post Posted June 1, 2009 What is the helmets purpose? Riot Gear? Biking? That would allow a better critique of function. As is the helmet looks a little flat a squarish in the rendering, and a little large. Just some quick concepts for a friend of mine who works in the ViDeO Game Industry. Actually Parel the helmet is just right and may even be too small. I drew it around a females head and the neck makes it all seem a bit over scaled. Helmet increases vision distance, night vision, protects head, kills anyone who touches it, as well as attaching to the thoracic suit structure at the spine and chest. Just a concept for fun. NICE WORK DUDE,THE CHARACTER 死 IS SO COOL,MAY BE YOU CAN PUT 亡，朽，黑暗，AND SO ON。THESE WORDS IN OUR CULTURE MEANS THE DARKNESS.死，MEANS DEAD,亡，MEANS END.死亡：MEANS THAT DEAD INDEED DEAD.黑暗 MEANS DARKNESS. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest MBW17 Report post Posted June 1, 2009 haha kills anyone that touches it. It would make a cool gas mask. haha yeah, i agree^^ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
