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Guest Kaiyuan

About the bag:

Try to communicate more through your designs. It was hard telling that the design was a bag. At first I thought it was some type of modern coffee maker or storage drive or something, to be honest. Sketch alot, use arrows and callouts, and it will lead to a more communicative and functionally designed product.

 

that's my two cents.

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Guest Lilith

me likie!! :P very nice

and i shall disagree with the Kaiyuan,

About the bag:..

i do not necessarily think of this creature as a bag.

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Guest Kaiyuan
me likie!! :P very nice

and i shall disagree with the Kaiyuan,

About the bag:..

i do not necessarily think of this creature as a bag.

I meant the sketches before the creature, haha.

Sorry for the confusion.

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Guest lokilabs
me likie!! :P very nice

and i shall disagree with the Kaiyuan,

About the bag:..

i do not necessarily think of this creature as a bag.

Thanks lilith I will definately post more sketches when I have the time. And yes I do agree the bag is a little harsh around the edges.

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Guest lokilabs
me likie!! :P very nice

and i shall disagree with the Kaiyuan,

About the bag:..

i do not necessarily think of this creature as a bag.

Thanks lilith I will definately post more sketches when I have the time. And yes I do agree the bag is a little harsh around the edges.

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Guest lokilabs
me likie!! :P very nice

and i shall disagree with the Kaiyuan,

About the bag:..

i do not necessarily think of this creature as a bag.

Thanks lilith I will definately post more sketches when I have the time. And yes I do agree the bag is a little harsh around the edges.

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