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Adam Michell - Student Portfolio

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Guest AdamMichell

I'm applying for some internships whilst off uni for the summer. Currently a 2nd year student.

 

www.coroflot.com/AdamMichell

 

This is my first attempt at putting some bits of work up, not completely finished but I would like a crit to see how people feel so far.

 

Whats wrong?

Whats right?

What do people think?

Layout?

 

I need to load some solidworks stuff up.

 

Some tips would be nice.

 

Look forward to hearing your views.

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Guest CAB

well from what i could see it looks like you have all the right things for a really nice portfolio. it looked pretty good for the most part but needs to be spiced up a bit i think. your layout is nice and clean and is really easy and is to follow which is nice. a few things i would change. it looks like you have a bunch of text for each page on the knifes and i think instead, you should you some scale and other ways of showing what ideas were used to help u get to your final concept. over all it's a really nice portfolio but is just a bit dull. i would just try to use less words and more hierarchy to help show what solutions. maybe some nice detail shots or call outs as well. keep up the good work.

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