Guest Kaiyuan Report post Posted March 15, 2009 And here is the final(s): ^Canson rendering Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest jmc Report post Posted March 15, 2009 And here is the final(s): ^Canson rendering The last two posts are really good sketches! Good job! Good shading and lighting, and colors make the work more cheerful. Lineweight still isn't perfect but it's not really critical, you'll simply learn it with time and practice probably. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
scorpio.tn1 0 Report post Posted March 15, 2009 And here is the final(s): ^Canson rendering The last two posts are really good sketches! Good job! Good shading and lighting, and colors make the work more cheerful. Lineweight still isn't perfect but it's not really critical, you'll simply learn it with time and practice probably. the black dots logo reminds me of a Dog Footprint, its all i see when i look at it. dono if that helps or not Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Kaiyuan Report post Posted March 15, 2009 And here is the final(s): ^Canson rendering The last two posts are really good sketches! Good job! Good shading and lighting, and colors make the work more cheerful. Lineweight still isn't perfect but it's not really critical, you'll simply learn it with time and practice probably. the black dots logo reminds me of a Dog Footprint, its all i see when i look at it. dono if that helps or not That's the company's logo (Keune). I'll upload my other final drawings of each product later, because the file sizes are huge. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Taro Report post Posted March 16, 2009 well-done! one thing that bothers me is the bottle ;/ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Kaiyuan Report post Posted March 22, 2009 Gel bottle. Sorry, bad camera quality. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Kaiyuan Report post Posted March 22, 2009 Spray Bottle. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Kaiyuan Report post Posted March 22, 2009 Shampoo bottle. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest MBW17 Report post Posted March 23, 2009 hmm, good job man. but hears what i think: ok, your marker work is very well i think, just now, focus on your perspective, you need to have that down good, bc if you have great renderings but bad perspective it does not look good. also work on giving your people more depth, they look reall flat... all and all man, great work, and my favorite is the orange shampoo bottle Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Kaiyuan Report post Posted April 5, 2009 We presented our watercraft for tourism final designs today. Also the last day for the Sat. High term . BUT. I made it through my audition and made it into the advanced product and trans design class ;D I don't have my canson. it's somewhere in my portfolio folder, i'll take a picture when its brighter outside. Finals for my Great Barrier Reef submarine/watercraft. ^Frontal focus. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Kaiyuan Report post Posted April 5, 2009 Rear focus: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Kaiyuan Report post Posted April 5, 2009 Interior: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest MBW17 Report post Posted April 5, 2009 nice marker, and nice layout. there are quite a lot of stuff out of perspective. but good work, and congrats Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Kaiyuan Report post Posted April 5, 2009 Could you explain where? I forced the perspective on the first reads because my instructor wanted more dramatic views. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest MBW17 Report post Posted April 5, 2009 on the first image the render on bottom left, the front looks out of place, and the other pics the views look soo flat and just look weird, cant really describe it, try to make it more 3D, problem is idk how to do it.. understand a little bit? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
