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And here is the final(s):

 

post-24002-1237094568.jpg

 

^Canson rendering

 

The last two posts are really good sketches! Good job!

 

Good shading and lighting, and colors make the work more cheerful. Lineweight still isn't perfect but it's not really critical, you'll simply learn it with time and practice probably.

 

:)

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And here is the final(s):

 

post-24002-1237094568.jpg

 

^Canson rendering

 

The last two posts are really good sketches! Good job!

 

Good shading and lighting, and colors make the work more cheerful. Lineweight still isn't perfect but it's not really critical, you'll simply learn it with time and practice probably.

 

:)

 

the black dots logo reminds me of a Dog Footprint, its all i see when i look at it. dono if that helps or not

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Guest Kaiyuan
And here is the final(s):

 

post-24002-1237094568.jpg

 

^Canson rendering

 

The last two posts are really good sketches! Good job!

 

Good shading and lighting, and colors make the work more cheerful. Lineweight still isn't perfect but it's not really critical, you'll simply learn it with time and practice probably.

 

;)

 

the black dots logo reminds me of a Dog Footprint, its all i see when i look at it. dono if that helps or not

That's the company's logo (Keune).

I'll upload my other final drawings of each product later, because the file sizes are huge.

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Guest MBW17

hmm, good job man. but hears what i think:

 

ok, your marker work is very well i think, just now, focus on your perspective, you need to have that down good, bc if you have great renderings but bad perspective it does not look good.

 

also work on giving your people more depth, they look reall flat...

 

all and all man, great work, and my favorite is the orange shampoo bottle

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Guest Kaiyuan

We presented our watercraft for tourism final designs today. Also the last day for the Sat. High term ^_^.

BUT. I made it through my audition and made it into the advanced product and trans design class ;D

 

I don't have my canson. it's somewhere in my portfolio folder, i'll take a picture when its brighter outside.

Finals for my Great Barrier Reef submarine/watercraft.

 

post-24002-1238893550.jpg

^Frontal focus.

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Guest MBW17

nice marker, and nice layout.

there are quite a lot of stuff out of perspective.

 

but good work, and congrats

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Guest Kaiyuan

Could you explain where?

I forced the perspective on the first reads because my instructor wanted more dramatic views.

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Guest MBW17

on the first image the render on bottom left, the front looks out of place, and the other pics the views look soo flat and just look weird, cant really describe it, try to make it more 3D, problem is idk how to do it..

 

understand a little bit?

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