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i like allot of the sketches on your link. in my opinion you are overworking some of your sketches. for instance, it would appear you can draw ellipses pretty well, so do not draw them over and over in the same spot. be confident and put a good one on the page. never stop practicing.

how about, "we cannot help you with branding?"

yup, that last one makes it official, you should definitely draw something besides cars. and all that goofy stuff you write in the posts, you should stop that also.

it's called PROBLEM SOLVING. figure it out, it is not a hard problem to solve. you are asking us to design it for you.

you should draw things other than cars i am thinking.

great rendering, but it looks like an RC car!

get better at your proportions?

i believe if you had some sketches to show your thought process it would be much much better.

your sketches need different line weights. always use 3 line weights per sketch - i.e. the heaviest line weight on the outside edge helps LAND the image and hint at light source.

totally sweet looking.

all the background color and shadows is making them "dirty." do not overwork 'em. otherwise they are looking pretty good.

YUK!

the phone is bizarre and looks like a 1930s science fiction spaceship concept. the watch thingy is not even worth commenting on. my colleague asked that you take a picture of yourself looking at the camera.