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post Oct 28 2008, 05:32 PM
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post Oct 28 2008, 05:34 PM
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post Oct 28 2008, 06:19 PM
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The strippers nice tonguesmiley.gif


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post Oct 29 2008, 12:44 AM
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i dont like ur font, its too hard to read, but that might just be me. Also, for your second page, seems like you made a real model for it? Then versus the look of the real cup, the striper picture, and the font seems too "low class" if that explains anything ;p


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post Oct 29 2008, 01:16 AM
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what this whole project is severely missing is telling us (the "client") how this works and why it is different than the others. yea you say to warm it up with "silhouette," but how? it doesn't look much different than other cups, mugs, etc. so so is it about your product that makes us want to buy it.

and yes change the font to a less bold cursive writing at least. i think a much more modern typeface would work a lot better...but that's just me.

the rendering though look good; it's just the final presentation is what needs to be executed better
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post Oct 29 2008, 01:18 AM
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let me add that yes i did see the usb port explanation, but what would be cool is a sort of storyboard or diagram type thing. like...the dude gets sad/worried cuz his hot drink is getting cold, then he plugs it in, the heat from the bottom of the cup rises up and then he's happy with his hot drink.

something simple like that i think would help explain the difference between this and conventional mugs and what not
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post Oct 30 2008, 03:09 PM
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its been done before but I like your final design, presentation could use some work as mentioned before but the in use light should definitly be red instead of blue to indicate warming


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post Oct 30 2008, 04:44 PM
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Looks like you could knock it over quite easily. Is that really what you want near a laptop!?

Operation rendering is nice, Im not sure HDPE is the right material either...softens quite easily and is fairly flexible. Can I suggest teflon coated ABS?
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post Oct 30 2008, 04:47 PM
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QUOTE (Taro @ Oct 29 2008, 12:44 AM) *
i dont like ur font, its too hard to read, but that might just be me. Also, for your second page, seems like you made a real model for it? Then versus the look of the real cup, the striper picture, and the font seems too "low class" if that explains anything ;p




I agree. But for me the real problem beyond the low class high class is what does the stripper have anything to do with a coffee warmer intended for the office? Unless you work in the office at a gentlemen's club.

It looks like a cross between an advertisement for a gentlemens club and a layout for an unrelated product.

This comment is unrelated to the actual design itself of course just the presentation.
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post Oct 30 2008, 04:50 PM
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QUOTE (under-dog @ Oct 30 2008, 04:47 PM) *
QUOTE (Taro @ Oct 29 2008, 12:44 AM) *
i dont like ur font, its too hard to read, but that might just be me. Also, for your second page, seems like you made a real model for it? Then versus the look of the real cup, the striper picture, and the font seems too "low class" if that explains anything ;p




I agree. But for me the real problem beyond the low class high class is what does the stripper have anything to do with a coffee warmer intended for the office? Unless you work in the office at a gentlemen's club.

It looks like a cross between an advertisement for a gentlemens club and a layout for an unrelated product.

This comment is unrelated to the actual design itself of course just the presentation.




Now that I look deeper I see that the shape of the mug and handle was inspired by the femanine form of the siluette but.............regardless my origional statement still stands.
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post Nov 1 2008, 01:50 PM
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Thanks for all the comments.... i appreciate it.

I explain why there's a silhouette of a lady....
not naked though.... haha

The design shape of the cup resembled the curvature of a lady....
so, its design for the ladies and men.....
why men can also owned it....
coz the cup will make (serve) you 'HOT' for it(drinks)......
cheezy huh.......

Since its a silhouette..... the cup warmer is in black in colour....

On the font style..... coz the design of the cup is curvy....
so its kinda related in a way......

its kinda fun accs to have in a office ..... in a certain way with all that stress

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post Nov 2 2008, 01:16 AM
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Looking good and convenient.
Especially power of usb design....ha ..Most of user will be PC user.
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