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Oct 28 2008, 05:32 PM
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Concept ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 94 Joined: 20-July 07 Member No.: 14076 Status: Amateur NYP |
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Oct 28 2008, 05:34 PM
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Concept ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 94 Joined: 20-July 07 Member No.: 14076 Status: Amateur NYP |
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Oct 28 2008, 06:19 PM
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Product ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 326 Joined: 4-January 08 Member No.: 18891 Status: Professional Skint |
The strippers nice
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Oct 29 2008, 12:44 AM
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Product ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 752 Joined: 28-August 08 Member No.: 24852 Status: Student Art Center College of Design |
i dont like ur font, its too hard to read, but that might just be me. Also, for your second page, seems like you made a real model for it? Then versus the look of the real cup, the striper picture, and the font seems too "low class" if that explains anything ;p
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Oct 29 2008, 01:16 AM
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Sketch ![]() Group: Members Posts: 30 Joined: 18-August 07 From: California Member No.: 14648 Status: Student Art Institute of Orange County |
what this whole project is severely missing is telling us (the "client") how this works and why it is different than the others. yea you say to warm it up with "silhouette," but how? it doesn't look much different than other cups, mugs, etc. so so is it about your product that makes us want to buy it.
and yes change the font to a less bold cursive writing at least. i think a much more modern typeface would work a lot better...but that's just me. the rendering though look good; it's just the final presentation is what needs to be executed better |
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Oct 29 2008, 01:18 AM
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Sketch ![]() Group: Members Posts: 30 Joined: 18-August 07 From: California Member No.: 14648 Status: Student Art Institute of Orange County |
let me add that yes i did see the usb port explanation, but what would be cool is a sort of storyboard or diagram type thing. like...the dude gets sad/worried cuz his hot drink is getting cold, then he plugs it in, the heat from the bottom of the cup rises up and then he's happy with his hot drink.
something simple like that i think would help explain the difference between this and conventional mugs and what not |
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Oct 30 2008, 03:09 PM
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![]() CAD file ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 199 Joined: 21-November 05 From: Toronto Member No.: 3821 Status: Professional Arato Designs |
its been done before but I like your final design, presentation could use some work as mentioned before but the in use light should definitly be red instead of blue to indicate warming
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Oct 30 2008, 04:44 PM
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Product ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 396 Joined: 20-October 06 From: London Member No.: 7450 Status: Professional Freelance Designer |
Looks like you could knock it over quite easily. Is that really what you want near a laptop!?
Operation rendering is nice, Im not sure HDPE is the right material either...softens quite easily and is fairly flexible. Can I suggest teflon coated ABS? |
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Oct 30 2008, 04:47 PM
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Product ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 324 Joined: 19-April 07 Member No.: 12019 Status: Professional BD |
i dont like ur font, its too hard to read, but that might just be me. Also, for your second page, seems like you made a real model for it? Then versus the look of the real cup, the striper picture, and the font seems too "low class" if that explains anything ;p I agree. But for me the real problem beyond the low class high class is what does the stripper have anything to do with a coffee warmer intended for the office? Unless you work in the office at a gentlemen's club. It looks like a cross between an advertisement for a gentlemens club and a layout for an unrelated product. This comment is unrelated to the actual design itself of course just the presentation. |
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Oct 30 2008, 04:50 PM
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Product ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 324 Joined: 19-April 07 Member No.: 12019 Status: Professional BD |
i dont like ur font, its too hard to read, but that might just be me. Also, for your second page, seems like you made a real model for it? Then versus the look of the real cup, the striper picture, and the font seems too "low class" if that explains anything ;p I agree. But for me the real problem beyond the low class high class is what does the stripper have anything to do with a coffee warmer intended for the office? Unless you work in the office at a gentlemen's club. It looks like a cross between an advertisement for a gentlemens club and a layout for an unrelated product. This comment is unrelated to the actual design itself of course just the presentation. Now that I look deeper I see that the shape of the mug and handle was inspired by the femanine form of the siluette but.............regardless my origional statement still stands. |
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Nov 1 2008, 01:50 PM
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Concept ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 94 Joined: 20-July 07 Member No.: 14076 Status: Amateur NYP |
Thanks for all the comments.... i appreciate it.
I explain why there's a silhouette of a lady.... not naked though.... haha The design shape of the cup resembled the curvature of a lady.... so, its design for the ladies and men..... why men can also owned it.... coz the cup will make (serve) you 'HOT' for it(drinks)...... cheezy huh....... Since its a silhouette..... the cup warmer is in black in colour.... On the font style..... coz the design of the cup is curvy.... so its kinda related in a way...... its kinda fun accs to have in a office ..... in a certain way with all that stress cheers -------------------- |
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Nov 2 2008, 01:16 AM
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Blank paper ![]() Group: Members Posts: 4 Joined: 2-November 08 Member No.: 26606 Status: Professional Realtek |
Looking good and convenient.
Especially power of usb design....ha ..Most of user will be PC user. |
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