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 Dec 11 2007, 05:32 AM
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 Functional  Group: Moderator Posts: 757 Joined: 25-August 04 From: Australia Member No.: 282 Status: Student UWS  |
Thanks to bngi. This month's topic is 'Super Soaker'.
Check out the Super Soaker Transformer Water Shooter from Hasbro. This is one bad ass toy. 
5296736885b3_Main400.jpg ( 24.22K )
Number of downloads: 142Please all participate and have some fun by designing one mayhem of a water shooting toy. -------------------- |
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Dec 11 2007, 01:30 PM
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Sketch Group: Members Posts: 40 Joined: 14-August 06 Member No.: 6582 Status: Amateur linus |
heres one that looks too cartoonish I think. Is it because I`ve used too thick black out lines?
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Dec 12 2007, 07:08 AM
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 Sketch Group: Members Posts: 35 Joined: 9-December 07 From: mexico city Member No.: 18203 Status: Student TEC-CEM |
WELL HERE ARE MINE....
IM GETTING THE IDEA OF ONE BIG JAVELIN.... ONE BIG SHOT OF WATER TO KILL ALL UR FRIENDS.... VERY MACHO THING... JAAJAJAJAJAJA    |
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Dec 12 2007, 11:07 AM
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 admin Group: Admin Posts: 2245 Joined: 6-February 04 From: The Netherlands Member No.: 2 Status: Professional Springtime |
QUOTE(vapnet @ Dec 11 2007, 01:30 PM)  heres one that looks too cartoonish I think. Is it because I`ve used too thick black out lines? Yeah I think that's the reason, I like the curved tubing btw. If the lines were half as thick they would still be thick enough I think. |
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Dec 15 2007, 07:46 PM
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Concept Group: Members Posts: 67 Joined: 11-January 07 From: Bournemouth Member No.: 8964 Status: Student Bournemouth University |
heres mine, I'm new to rendering on photoshop, so its a bit dodge, but xmas break now, so practise makes perfect!
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Dec 16 2007, 06:10 AM
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Functional Group: Moderator Posts: 757 Joined: 25-August 04 From: Australia Member No.: 282 Status: Student UWS |
Super_Soaker.jpg ( 27.81K )
Number of downloads: 88 Found the design I am happy with. Leave refinement to another day. =] vapnet> I reckon it looks good as is in sketching form. -------------------- |
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Dec 19 2007, 07:58 AM
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Product Group: Moderator Posts: 716 Joined: 19-December 07 Member No.: 18508 Status: Student ACCD |
hi everyone.
new here. introducing myself with my 1st work. I chose NERF as my brand. which i feel is a valid choice, since it is also owned by HASBRO. As of now, im juss styling, no real concept at the moment. 
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Jan 1 2008, 04:35 PM
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Sketch Group: Members Posts: 5 Joined: 27-December 07 Member No.: 18692 Status: Student USTB |
Hi all, happy new year!
I am new here, seems like someone's holding an exam in this classroom, cool! I may join as well. 
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Jan 3 2008, 09:37 PM
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Sketch Group: Members Posts: 34 Joined: 18-June 07 Member No.: 13357 Status: Student Milwaukee Institute of Art and Design |
Just started, but wanted to get some feedback before the end! This is a super-soaker vest with front pocket for nades (water balloons) and back tanks for pressurized guns which can also rest in the holder.
Any opinions on the concept? Any advice on sketching? P.S. Great session! I'll be scanning in more polished drawings as as they come (instead of quick photos).
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Jan 8 2008, 04:31 PM
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 Industrial Designer Group: Admin Posts: 1848 Joined: 6-February 04 From: Shanghai, China Member No.: 1 Status: Professional Speck Design |
hey ryan.manty, fun concept! sketch looks a bit vague to me. did you a scanner or camera for capturing?
and if you have photoshop or similar software, then i suggest to make the background white. -------------------- |
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Jan 12 2008, 09:59 AM
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Industrial Designer Group: Admin Posts: 1848 Joined: 6-February 04 From: Shanghai, China Member No.: 1 Status: Professional Speck Design |
Here is mine:
supersoaker.jpg ( 307.13K )
Number of downloads: 90Tools: Ballpen, fineliners, pencil, markers and texture samples -------------------- |
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Jan 15 2008, 03:16 AM
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Sketch Group: Members Posts: 6 Joined: 7-January 08 Member No.: 18960 Status: Professional Tsinghua University |
nice, man, may be some more details is better, hehe
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Jan 15 2008, 03:35 AM
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 One who thinks. Group: Members Posts: 564 Joined: 30-November 06 From: Milwaukee, WI Member No.: 8137 Status: Professional Grüv Design |
QUOTE (waikit @ Jan 12 2008, 02:59 AM) Here is mine:
supersoaker.jpg ( 307.13K )
Number of downloads: 90Tools: Ballpen, fineliners, pencil, markers and texture samples Nice linework. Perspective is a little iffy near the front, and the shading is really flat. I'd trace the linework and do another rendering to push that, 3 dimensionally. Right now all the orange is pretty much the exact same tone. -------------------- "the boundries between art and engineering exist only in our minds" - Theo Jansen
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Jan 15 2008, 03:37 AM
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One who thinks. Group: Members Posts: 564 Joined: 30-November 06 From: Milwaukee, WI Member No.: 8137 Status: Professional Grüv Design |
QUOTE (vapnet @ Dec 11 2007, 06:30 AM) heres one that looks too cartoonish I think. Is it because I`ve used too thick black out lines? It's because of your line weight. It's all over the place. Next time make the bottom edge of everything darker and thicker. Also, your light source is also all over the place. Sometimes you've placed it toward the right, othertime toward the left. -------------------- "the boundries between art and engineering exist only in our minds" - Theo Jansen
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Jan 16 2008, 02:14 PM
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Industrial Designer Group: Admin Posts: 1848 Joined: 6-February 04 From: Shanghai, China Member No.: 1 Status: Professional Speck Design |
ramxue, yeah i know. should try harder on details
cash68,you're right. the perspective is a bit off and i should have created more depth -------------------- |
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