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Sep 25 2007, 05:12 PM
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Detailed ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 114 Joined: 26-December 06 Member No.: 8662 Status: Amateur none |
Hi all.
i worked on some new Mercedes-Benz. a just for fun work! the new SL based on Porsche 911 and MLS based in ML. ![]() ![]() -------------------- DESIGN 4 better FUTURE!
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Sep 25 2007, 08:17 PM
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Mod Squad ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Moderator Posts: 2434 Joined: 10-November 05 From: New York, USA Member No.: 3706 Status: Professional Motorola |
Not much to critique really. The photoshop job isn't very convincing, the grills on the top are just copy and pasted on so it doesn't read correctly.
I'm also not really sure what kind of vehicle the bottom two are supposed to be. Sport utility sedans? |
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Sep 28 2007, 06:11 PM
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Detailed ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 114 Joined: 26-December 06 Member No.: 8662 Status: Amateur none |
Hi and Thanks!
these are just some ideas and just a fun photoshop work! the bottom work should be an off-road sedan. -------------------- DESIGN 4 better FUTURE!
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Sep 29 2007, 09:52 PM
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Sketch ![]() Group: Members Posts: 16 Joined: 15-May 06 From: Under the stairs Member No.: 5679 Status: Student ACCD |
.....u need to be stopped. jk But seriously some Porschepheliacs might want to kill u if they see this, and making a Merc Brat is just wrong.
-------------------- Dont sweat the petty things, pet the sweaty things.
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Oct 17 2007, 05:57 PM
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Sketch ![]() Group: Members Posts: 30 Joined: 18-August 07 From: California Member No.: 14648 Status: Student Art Institute of Orange County |
the rendering is well done...except for the grills. But the only problem I have with it is that it just looks like a Porsche with a mercedes grill (on the sl concepts). Think about incorporating harder contour lines rather than the much softer Porsche-esque feel. As i am just starting out in the whole industrial design field...take these suggestions for what they are worth
peace |
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Oct 17 2007, 11:00 PM
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Sketch ![]() Group: Members Posts: 19 Joined: 9-January 07 From: Köln (Cologne) Member No.: 8887 Status: Student Köln International School of Design (KISD) |
Hi and Thanks! these are just some ideas and just a fun photoshop work! the bottom work should be an off-road sedan. "some ideas" in "Finished Projects" hmmm ?!?! what? "just a fun..." ...but now seriously... Some projects that are showed off here at the forum simply can't be discussed because of a leak of conceptual background. -------------------- portfolio: www.matthiaslange.de
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Oct 18 2007, 02:11 AM
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![]() Concept ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 87 Joined: 1-April 07 Member No.: 11469 Status: Amateur None |
the rendering is well done...except for the grills. But the only problem I have with it is that it just looks like a Porsche with a mercedes grill (on the sl concepts). Think about incorporating harder contour lines rather than the much softer Porsche-esque feel. As i am just starting out in the whole industrial design field...take these suggestions for what they are worth peace These aren't renders, but photoshoped pictures. -------------------- flickr.com/designfabulous
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Oct 19 2007, 09:02 PM
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Sketch ![]() Group: Members Posts: 30 Joined: 18-August 07 From: California Member No.: 14648 Status: Student Art Institute of Orange County |
that's why they look way too porsche-ish (word?)
then i would highly recommend rendering something either photoshop or sketching out your ideas and what you're thinking in your head. the best thing i've found to do is to not worry about the quality necessarily, just sketch out what you're thinking, then take some vellum and go back over what you've drawn and correct any mistakes |
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Oct 19 2007, 09:46 PM
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Sketch ![]() Group: Members Posts: 12 Joined: 7-November 06 Member No.: 7701 Status: Student University of Hertfordshire |
Oh men What have you done!!
I almost had a heart attack..... I love the Porsche 911 don't commit that crime!! Porshe is Porsche not a Merc. Porsche is an Engineering Icon! Just don't mess around with it.... Just don't.... Please don't take this personnel my comments, but doing that to the 911 its a crime... |
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