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Feb 19 2008, 07:12 AM
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#121
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Concept ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 50 Joined: 30-July 06 Member No.: 6395 Status: Student Syracuse University |
Yo, i am lovin that BMW sketch!
It's so.....artistic. |
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Mar 1 2008, 04:40 AM
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#122
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![]() CAD file ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 195 Joined: 24-August 05 From: Hungary Member No.: 2900 Status: Student MOME |
glad u like it Miro.
heres a new one ... ![]() -------------------- |
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Mar 1 2008, 08:52 PM
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#123
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![]() Detailed ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 108 Joined: 14-December 07 From: Birmingham , UK Member No.: 18349 Status: Student TIC |
hi ... im planning to post all my sketches here and i hope i get some feedback ... it would be greatly appreciated since i wanna pass the entrance exams to uni in summer 2006... i think i have a lot more to learn since i never went to an art school but i hope ill learn something here, on this board too so heres the 1st one ... i used markers and then finished in ps ... i had some problems with the bg ... finally i did this though i have a few other versions too ... anyway ... ![]() maybe too much contrast ... ? edit: well maybe thats too much coz i see there some parts slurring ... so heres the original: ![]() I just saw the first pic, noticed you ask for tips then went away quickly fixing up the perpective oon your first sketch. Then I notice you have like 10 pages of posts, and all your work is looking incredible now! I thought the overall "look" and rendering on even the first was really nice and had good prescence, but all the recent stuff is on another level, amazing! Well heres my quick fixup of the first one for all its worth...
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Mar 1 2008, 11:36 PM
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#124
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Product ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 339 Joined: 8-July 06 Member No.: 6173 Status: Professional freelance |
thx Reggie ... heres a quick experimental rendering ... for the sake of technique ... The perspective render works a lot better than the side profile. In both cases, though, I think the jagged edge to the background really distracts from the design, as do the random eraser lines. I really like the high contrast black and the way the red is reflected back into the hood, though. Your newest rendering is much cleaner, and very cool (though it's a little bit difficult to tell what it actually is, I quite enjoy the form). -------------------- |
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Mar 2 2008, 03:31 PM
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#125
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![]() CAD file ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 195 Joined: 24-August 05 From: Hungary Member No.: 2900 Status: Student MOME |
hey firecracker, thx for the feedback ... i might do an overlay of that Volvo ... i already did one about a year ago ... looks like its going to be a rite, and i do an overlay of the same sketch every year Turbofrog, i agree on the jagged edges and that the bg is too distracting ... thx for the feedback ... the new one is nothing special, again ... just a new rendering technique and some form study ... -------------------- |
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Mar 6 2008, 06:18 PM
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![]() CAD file ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 195 Joined: 24-August 05 From: Hungary Member No.: 2900 Status: Student MOME |
some freelance work ... sketch/illustration for Nike ...
i should have darkened the bg behind the rear of the shoe (right side on the image) where is white, to make it pop ... oh well ... next time
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Mar 24 2008, 03:35 PM
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![]() CAD file ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 195 Joined: 24-August 05 From: Hungary Member No.: 2900 Status: Student MOME |
another bimmer ...
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Apr 12 2008, 06:11 PM
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#128
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![]() CAD file ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 195 Joined: 24-August 05 From: Hungary Member No.: 2900 Status: Student MOME |
ok people ... cross your fingers for us, cross your fingers for ERNO ... see you in Mian ... and of course i dont let you without a sketch ... a new angle for me ...
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Apr 13 2008, 01:14 PM
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#129
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CAD file ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 150 Joined: 5-December 06 From: Birmingham, UK Member No.: 8272 Status: Student Coventry University - BA/Mdes Automotive Design |
Hi Foga.
Ive been looking at this thread for a while, some really nice work. Looks asif youve started to take off with the Car design, last two are pretty amazing. The rendering technique on the Bmw looks awesome. Well done mate. Keep to post. |
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Apr 26 2008, 05:11 PM
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#130
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Blank paper ![]() Group: Members Posts: 3 Joined: 6-February 06 Member No.: 4542 Status: Student NTU |
Hey,
Nice work. I dont know if anyones already said this, as i only made it to page 4. Put down the pencil!!! you can draw/render/layout well go to see design, gain an understanding of it in a broader context. uni's love that. Get a job working for a design company. Make tea etc, you'll be surprised what you learn. good luck with everything. |
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May 10 2008, 12:52 AM
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#131
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![]() CAD file ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 195 Joined: 24-August 05 From: Hungary Member No.: 2900 Status: Student MOME |
hey ... thx for the replys. iliffe: thx ... well yes, i study pd now and i pretty like it, but apparently im into cardesign ... designfix: thanks for the kind words ... what u can see in this topic, its just my freetime fun ... so nothing serious ... either way, an intership would be nice ... ill post some finished non-car related projects soon. -------------------- |
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May 27 2008, 11:35 AM
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#132
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![]() CAD file ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 195 Joined: 24-August 05 From: Hungary Member No.: 2900 Status: Student MOME |
something different this time ... my first go at "digital painting" ...
![]() some smoke would have been nice, but i couldnt make it look right ... no reference pic btw -------------------- |
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May 27 2008, 04:20 PM
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One who thinks. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 549 Joined: 30-November 06 From: Milwaukee, WI Member No.: 8137 Status: Professional Grüv Design |
Not really diggin it. I liked your earlier renderings a bit better.
-------------------- "the boundries between art and engineering exist only in our minds" - Theo Jansen
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May 28 2008, 08:36 AM
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Product ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 325 Joined: 4-January 08 Member No.: 18891 Status: Professional Skint |
Your style has improved so much over the last couple of years. Its great to see the progression.
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Jun 1 2008, 05:10 PM
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#135
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![]() Sketch ![]() Group: Members Posts: 5 Joined: 7-June 05 From: Indonesia Member No.: 2209 Status: Student -UPH- |
W(^0^)W
I'm really amazed!! u do really practice hard... It's really motivating. Thx 4 sharing, foga. And keep on sharing.. =P -------------------- |
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