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 May 29 2009, 09:45 PM
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May 29 2009, 10:13 PM
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Sketch Group: Members Posts: 19 Joined: 30-April 09 Member No.: 30431 Status: Student University of Derby |
honestly, I can't work it out...
but it looks cool ? |
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May 29 2009, 10:48 PM
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 One who thinks. Group: Members Posts: 549 Joined: 30-November 06 From: Milwaukee, WI Member No.: 8137 Status: Professional Grüv Design |
Needs better lineweight. The texturing in PS is a nice touch, but as previous commenter stated, I can't figure out what I'm looking at exactly. The problem is line weight (absent) and shading (contradictory). The bottom half looks flat, the back half looks like the light is coming from one direction, then there's a blue smear on top of the other part, which doesn't jive with the back. The whole thing reads very flat.
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May 30 2009, 12:18 AM
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QUOTE (cash68 @ May 29 2009, 11:48 PM)  Needs better lineweight. The texturing in PS is a nice touch, but as previous commenter stated, I can't figure out what I'm looking at exactly. The problem is line weight (absent) and shading (contradictory). The bottom half looks flat, the back half looks like the light is coming from one direction, then there's a blue smear on top of the other part, which doesn't jive with the back. The whole thing reads very flat. Thanks Cash. I agree it does read flat. I will work on that with the second rendition. I will have to pick a light direction. |
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May 30 2009, 03:29 AM
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May 30 2009, 05:32 AM
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Product Group: Members Posts: 695 Joined: 28-August 08 Member No.: 24852 Status: Student Art Center College of Design |
oh i thought that part was the front (due to the goggle looking thing on the back)
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May 30 2009, 12:21 PM
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What is the helmets purpose? Riot Gear? Biking? That would allow a better critique of function. As is the helmet looks a little flat a squarish in the rendering, and a little large.
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May 30 2009, 03:56 PM
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QUOTE (parel @ May 30 2009, 12:21 PM) What is the helmets purpose? Riot Gear? Biking? That would allow a better critique of function. As is the helmet looks a little flat a squarish in the rendering, and a little large. Just some quick concepts for a friend of mine who works in the ViDeO Game Industry. Actually Parel the helmet is just right and may even be too small. I drew it around a females head and the neck makes it all seem a bit over scaled. Helmet increases vision distance, night vision, protects head, kills anyone who touches it, as well as attaching to the thoracic suit structure at the spine and chest. Just a concept for fun. 
hel3.jpg ( 375.12K )
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May 30 2009, 06:44 PM
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haha kills anyone that touches it. It would make a cool gas mask.
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May 30 2009, 08:01 PM
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May 30 2009, 11:32 PM
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Sketch Group: Members Posts: 8 Joined: 20-May 09 Member No.: 30822 Status: Amateur none |
really cool looking. reminds me of the helmet princess laya used in star wars to rescue whats his name from jabba the hut.
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May 31 2009, 01:06 AM
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QUOTE (funwithapencil @ May 31 2009, 12:32 AM) really cool looking. reminds me of the helmet princess laya used in star wars to rescue whats his name from jabba the hut. ill have to check that one out. |
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May 31 2009, 08:45 PM
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Detailed Group: Members Posts: 110 Joined: 3-February 07 Member No.: 9741 Status: Professional l-labs |
Hey thanks for all the replies. Any more comments would be greatly appreciated.
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Jun 1 2009, 01:37 AM
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Sketch Group: Members Posts: 12 Joined: 31-May 09 Member No.: 31012 Status: Student BEIJING INSTITUTE OF GRAPHIC COMMINOCATION |
QUOTE (lokilabs @ May 30 2009, 04:56 PM) QUOTE (parel @ May 30 2009, 12:21 PM) What is the helmets purpose? Riot Gear? Biking? That would allow a better critique of function. As is the helmet looks a little flat a squarish in the rendering, and a little large. Just some quick concepts for a friend of mine who works in the ViDeO Game Industry. Actually Parel the helmet is just right and may even be too small. I drew it around a females head and the neck makes it all seem a bit over scaled. Helmet increases vision distance, night vision, protects head, kills anyone who touches it, as well as attaching to the thoracic suit structure at the spine and chest. Just a concept for fun.
hel3.jpg ( 375.12K )
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Jun 1 2009, 03:48 AM
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QUOTE (Kaiyuan @ May 30 2009, 12:44 PM) haha kills anyone that touches it. It would make a cool gas mask. haha yeah, i agree^^ -------------------- |
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